Monday, 13 October 2008

Queueing

In the supermarket
Queueing
life on hold
time to ponder
thoughts tumble
2 for 1
searching for a special
planning a menus
for uncertain futures
building stranger's lives
from their groceries
waiting
queueing
until checkout

2 comments:

JesseTheCat said...

I think this one is my favourite of your writings! I wont spoil it by saying too much...I just connect with this poem :)

Toadee said...

appreciate your comment Jesse. It means a lot to me when people find something meaningful in my writing.